tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-235819935525106281.post8835375708495932651..comments2023-06-30T11:49:08.901-04:00Comments on Non Sequitur: THE BREAK UP: A LOVE LETTER TO MY BOOKNon Sequitur718http://www.blogger.com/profile/16961746086130798464noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-235819935525106281.post-57431518371155405422010-08-30T18:50:25.002-04:002010-08-30T18:50:25.002-04:00Awww, I'm reading your right now. You really a...Awww, I'm reading your right now. You really are so beautiful. In 93,000 word you encapsulated the whole human experience in the darkest of times, in the darkest of people, let there be light. Forgive my impatience, forgive my doubt, from the depths of the soul and the bottom of my heart: I love you. My love and will, will see us through.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11224340565562647332noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-235819935525106281.post-80711208661180995462010-08-24T10:40:07.621-04:002010-08-24T10:40:07.621-04:00@KeithB:Lol. So True.@KeithB:Lol. So True.Non Sequitur718https://www.blogger.com/profile/16961746086130798464noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-235819935525106281.post-78919483056634225052010-08-24T08:49:14.943-04:002010-08-24T08:49:14.943-04:00I think you got caught cheating on the book; with ...I think you got caught cheating on the book; with poetry, comedy, and that fast ass, no good, double-timing screenplay who probably ran his mouth and told the book that you were steppin out on him. Now, let's see if the book has game and can come calling you late on some stormy night and get back in good with you lol.<br /><br />Keith B.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-235819935525106281.post-7552409903573674752010-08-18T19:52:01.911-04:002010-08-18T19:52:01.911-04:00Forget the writing, is this a real break up from y...Forget the writing, is this a real break up from your literal book?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-235819935525106281.post-82316548685307525432010-08-14T05:34:41.583-04:002010-08-14T05:34:41.583-04:00Poor writing or not, its still poetic.Poor writing or not, its still poetic.Preternaturalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17174898180972037108noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-235819935525106281.post-67909232968474070222010-08-14T00:30:45.111-04:002010-08-14T00:30:45.111-04:00@the both of yous: I was being melodramatic and th...@the both of yous: I was being melodramatic and that style is actually considered poor writing, lol.Non Sequitur718https://www.blogger.com/profile/16961746086130798464noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-235819935525106281.post-77007261659904421082010-08-14T00:08:30.007-04:002010-08-14T00:08:30.007-04:00You are indeed becoming very poetic. Maybe you can...You are indeed becoming very poetic. Maybe you can critique my work one of these days. I like this.Preternaturalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17174898180972037108noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-235819935525106281.post-38716228924062327422010-08-13T22:14:18.128-04:002010-08-13T22:14:18.128-04:00Wow. Very emphatic and poetic. I would actually ac...Wow. Very emphatic and poetic. I would actually accept this break up because of the flow. I hope this isn't a personal story.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com